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		<title>Comment on Why I (occasionally, randomly) rank fellow-writers out of five by Emily</title>
		<link>http://emilygale.co.uk/2012/02/why-i-occasionally-randomly-rank-fellow-writers-out-of-five/comment-page-1/#comment-2349</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 22:43:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Andy,

Thanks for your comment and rating :) Don&#039;t get me wrong - providing feedback is something I do frequently but providing it on Goodreads is what the post is really about. When I started out I was a member of Writewords, where members upload work for comment. For years I&#039;ve written lengthy assessments on full-length manuscripts and until recently I was dealing with submissions for a literary agent. I know the value of pre-publication feedback - it works both ways, to hone your own editing skills and as you say, to get a feel for how readers respond to your work. Reviews are different and that&#039;s what I meant here.

Short stories are another discipline altogether. Not my speciality, as much as I enjoy reading them from time to time.

Cheers,
Emily</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Andy,</p>
<p>Thanks for your comment and rating <img src='http://emilygale.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Don&#8217;t get me wrong &#8211; providing feedback is something I do frequently but providing it on Goodreads is what the post is really about. When I started out I was a member of Writewords, where members upload work for comment. For years I&#8217;ve written lengthy assessments on full-length manuscripts and until recently I was dealing with submissions for a literary agent. I know the value of pre-publication feedback &#8211; it works both ways, to hone your own editing skills and as you say, to get a feel for how readers respond to your work. Reviews are different and that&#8217;s what I meant here.</p>
<p>Short stories are another discipline altogether. Not my speciality, as much as I enjoy reading them from time to time.</p>
<p>Cheers,<br />
Emily</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why I (occasionally, randomly) rank fellow-writers out of five by Andy Charman</title>
		<link>http://emilygale.co.uk/2012/02/why-i-occasionally-randomly-rank-fellow-writers-out-of-five/comment-page-1/#comment-2348</link>
		<dc:creator>Andy Charman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 19:07:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice blog entry. 3 Stars.




(Sorry, couldn&#039;t resist that!)


Have you seen Every Day Fiction? A web site that publishes a short story a day and allows subscribers to rate the results. It is an excellent site for honing a very specific skill; the skill of writing short stories for the very specific audience that will read and rate a story a day. Only a small proportion of that skill is portable.

Becoming sensitive to readership demands is, I&#039;d have thought, really important if you want to write books that people want to read. Frequent, honest feedback is really helpful. 

As a published author (and professional reader) you are far more qualified than to provide that essential oil for others. Heavens, it&#039;s almost your DUTY to provide feedback!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice blog entry. 3 Stars.</p>
<p>(Sorry, couldn&#8217;t resist that!)</p>
<p>Have you seen Every Day Fiction? A web site that publishes a short story a day and allows subscribers to rate the results. It is an excellent site for honing a very specific skill; the skill of writing short stories for the very specific audience that will read and rate a story a day. Only a small proportion of that skill is portable.</p>
<p>Becoming sensitive to readership demands is, I&#8217;d have thought, really important if you want to write books that people want to read. Frequent, honest feedback is really helpful. </p>
<p>As a published author (and professional reader) you are far more qualified than to provide that essential oil for others. Heavens, it&#8217;s almost your DUTY to provide feedback!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Imagination at Full Speed by Emily</title>
		<link>http://emilygale.co.uk/2012/02/imagination-at-full-speed/comment-page-1/#comment-2346</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2012 22:34:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And you know, if I tell Jonah that a thief stole your bike he&#039;ll say: &quot;I bet it&#039;s the same thief that stole my scooter.&quot; The world is small and sparsely populated in his head - and this is a child who has done several long-haul trips! I remember when Madeleine used to think &quot;London&quot; consisted of West End Lane, so when I&#039;d walk her down to Kilburn she&#039;d ask &quot;Are we near France yet?&quot;

I&#039;m very sorry about your bike. You could borrow mine if you don&#039;t mind looking like Angela Lansbury in Bedknobs and Broomsticks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And you know, if I tell Jonah that a thief stole your bike he&#8217;ll say: &#8220;I bet it&#8217;s the same thief that stole my scooter.&#8221; The world is small and sparsely populated in his head &#8211; and this is a child who has done several long-haul trips! I remember when Madeleine used to think &#8220;London&#8221; consisted of West End Lane, so when I&#8217;d walk her down to Kilburn she&#8217;d ask &#8220;Are we near France yet?&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;m very sorry about your bike. You could borrow mine if you don&#8217;t mind looking like Angela Lansbury in Bedknobs and Broomsticks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Imagination at Full Speed by Andrew</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrew</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2012 11:40:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can imagine him taking the word &quot;thief&quot; and associating it with a small creature taking his scooter: it sounds right, doesn&#039;t it? Like Elf. Thief. Pointy ears. Evil grin. Actually I had a similar experience when I went to school and over the weekend some kids had vandalised the buildings. I imagined these &quot;vandals&quot; to be little devil things, gleefully daubing graffiti everywhere and breaking windows, cackling as they went.

When I was little I knew of &quot;robbers&quot;, or people who broke into houses. I imagined them to be people apart from society: the sort who would barrack for Skeletor instead of He-Man. I couldn&#039;t imagine how *anyone* could barrack for Skeletor, but reasoned that if someone was bad enough to rob a house I couldn&#039;t put anything past them. They wore masks like the Hamburglar, incidentally.

And it&#039;s funny I should read this the day I discovered my bike missing: some little &quot;thieves&quot; made off with it yesterday, lock and all...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can imagine him taking the word &#8220;thief&#8221; and associating it with a small creature taking his scooter: it sounds right, doesn&#8217;t it? Like Elf. Thief. Pointy ears. Evil grin. Actually I had a similar experience when I went to school and over the weekend some kids had vandalised the buildings. I imagined these &#8220;vandals&#8221; to be little devil things, gleefully daubing graffiti everywhere and breaking windows, cackling as they went.</p>
<p>When I was little I knew of &#8220;robbers&#8221;, or people who broke into houses. I imagined them to be people apart from society: the sort who would barrack for Skeletor instead of He-Man. I couldn&#8217;t imagine how *anyone* could barrack for Skeletor, but reasoned that if someone was bad enough to rob a house I couldn&#8217;t put anything past them. They wore masks like the Hamburglar, incidentally.</p>
<p>And it&#8217;s funny I should read this the day I discovered my bike missing: some little &#8220;thieves&#8221; made off with it yesterday, lock and all&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Books for younger children by Emily</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 06:06:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Geneva and Josie, thanks for your lovely message.
Emily x</description>
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Emily x</p>
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		<title>Comment on Books for younger children by Geneva Jaeger</title>
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		<dc:creator>Geneva Jaeger</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Feb 2012 19:38:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Have a Grandaughter Josie, I get to watch one day a week (5 sons &amp; 2 Grandsons - grandaughter far away) we both love reading your &quot;Just Josie&quot; books together!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have a Grandaughter Josie, I get to watch one day a week (5 sons &amp; 2 Grandsons &#8211; grandaughter far away) we both love reading your &#8220;Just Josie&#8221; books together!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why I (occasionally, randomly) rank fellow-writers out of five by Emily</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Feb 2012 01:12:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Fiona, thanks for saying you enjoyed the reading - I&#039;ve only ever done two readings, one at my launch and one in my sitting room, so now you&#039;ve heard both! 

Six Impossible Things has had plenty of flick-throughs since I first read it so it has to remain in view, along with some other gems. E. x</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Fiona, thanks for saying you enjoyed the reading &#8211; I&#8217;ve only ever done two readings, one at my launch and one in my sitting room, so now you&#8217;ve heard both! </p>
<p>Six Impossible Things has had plenty of flick-throughs since I first read it so it has to remain in view, along with some other gems. E. x</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why I (occasionally, randomly) rank fellow-writers out of five by Fiona Wood</title>
		<link>http://emilygale.co.uk/2012/02/why-i-occasionally-randomly-rank-fellow-writers-out-of-five/comment-page-1/#comment-2312</link>
		<dc:creator>Fiona Wood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 11:22:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What beautiful reading on your author page! Visiting there, and reading this post make me impatient for your next book, Emily. Oxytocin, maybe? And I just saw my book is in your lovely desk photo! (blushes)(chuffed)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What beautiful reading on your author page! Visiting there, and reading this post make me impatient for your next book, Emily. Oxytocin, maybe? And I just saw my book is in your lovely desk photo! (blushes)(chuffed)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fuel For Readers and Writers by Emily</title>
		<link>http://emilygale.co.uk/2012/02/fuel-for-readers-and-writers/comment-page-1/#comment-2305</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Feb 2012 01:34:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Luisa. That&#039;s my new desk...new enough not to be an absolute bomb-site. Still a show-desk. It won&#039;t last.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Luisa. That&#8217;s my new desk&#8230;new enough not to be an absolute bomb-site. Still a show-desk. It won&#8217;t last.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fuel For Readers and Writers by Luisa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Luisa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Feb 2012 12:24:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you very much for the lovely mention, and for all the great links! And I must say, your site is looking very gorgeous. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you very much for the lovely mention, and for all the great links! And I must say, your site is looking very gorgeous. <img src='http://emilygale.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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